Thursday, 21 October 2010

School Magazine cover draft 1

This is my first draft of my school magazine cover.

I have asked Ryan to look in to the camera so when the readers look at my cover it will draw them in t the magazine. I have chosen a medium shot so that it can show his school uniform to show the fact that this is a school magazine and he is at school. Many people I have asked mentioned the way he is looking at you and said that that was a good thing


On the other hand, Many people I have asked for improvements have noticed about the free space underneath the splash and text and also some above the text so what I am going to do is move the splash down so it's not on his face to much and make the text abit bigger so that it stands out more.I'm also going to make the issue number, price and date smaller so that the subheading stand out more. Also the school logo will be brought down and then increasedin size so it can then fill more space.
Also because some magazine covers I have seen and analysed, if they have mentioned the word free or exclusive etc they will make them standout so I will make free and exclusive bold so that when people look at the magazine they will be drawn to the words and get more interesed.Also People have said that they would put the logo abit bigger so I will be increasing the size of it.

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